如何描述人物在故事中的样子(describe the way a character looks in a story)

人物塑造驱动故事。强大而成熟的角色不仅能吸引读者的注意力,而且有助于推动情节的发展。良好的性格发展的一部分是描述一个角色的长相。为读者创造强烈的视觉形象使人物看起来更真实。在某些情况下,角色外貌的某些方面也可以影响故事的情节或主题,例如种族、年龄或某些伤疤。...

人物塑造驱动故事。强大而成熟的角色不仅能吸引读者的注意力,而且有助于推动情节的发展。良好的性格发展的一部分是描述一个角色的长相。为读者创造强烈的视觉形象使人物看起来更真实。在某些情况下,角色外貌的某些方面也可以影响故事的情节或主题,例如种族、年龄或某些伤疤。

使用具体的例子

从你的角色描述开始的最好的地方是具体的例子。不要说你的女主角“漂亮”或“苗条”,要说她有一头栗色的长发,水晶般的蓝眼睛,浓密的睫毛和突出膝盖的腿。具体点。说一个角色有“棕色头发”并不能像说一个角色有长长的可怕的头发那样让人印象深刻。不要只关注角色外表的明显方面,如眼睛、头发或身高。想想角色穿什么样的衣服,角色有没有雀斑或痣,她的牙齿是直的还是弯的,或者他有什么样的伤疤。避免泛泛而谈和陈词滥调。

以身作则

避免用每个角色外观的详细信息列表使读者负担过重。要创建生动的角色图像,而无需在细节上花费大量时间,请选择对描述产生连锁反应的细节。例如,如果你确定你的角色已经80岁了,那么就没有必要花太多时间描述他的皱纹、秃发和其他假定的年龄迹象。相反,记下他们的缺席,这是出乎意料的。其他可能产生连锁反应的细节包括角色的种族或民族、体重、发型和身体装饰,如纹身或穿孔。只是小心不要陷入刻板印象。

使用比喻语言

有时候,简单的描述不足以表达一个人外表背后的感觉。例如,描述一个人脸上的美丽程度或一丝悲伤或绝望是很困难的。使用比喻和明喻等比喻性语言可以帮助你表达你无法用语言表达的无形品质。尽管比喻语言无法量化描述,但它会传达一种情感,帮助读者更好地理解。你可以将一个角色描述为“笑容如夏”或“眉头如风暴云”。几个位置恰当的细节将在读者的脑海中勾勒出这个形象。

包括运动

身体运动会影响角色的外观。例如,您的角色可能会无精打采地走路,也可能会虚张声势地昂首阔步。她可能会小口细嚼,或者尽情地吃东西。他可能会进行直接的眼神交流,或者在房间里紧张地移动眼睛。角色移动的方式描绘了一幅肖像。你也可以用动作词来描述身体特征。例如,鼻子可以“抽搐”,嘴巴可以“顽皮”

  • 发表于 2021-11-21 11:07
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